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                      Walking in Waterloo

                      Step            to the side
                      Elbows like compass points,
                              I glide.
                      Pull a shoulder forward,
                      then turn, as sharp as
                      the crackle of the loudspeaker.

                      Dance with the crowd,
                      navigate faces --
                      it’s war at thirty paces
                      just to make the train.

                      Click of heels,
                      there’s no place like home --
                      or platform four!
                      Beyond the sea of frowns and suits,
                      a young girl scoots,
                      bum snug in jeans.

                      The man beside me trips.
                      “Excuuuse me,”
                      a stalled lady lifts a botoxed brow.
                      I dash around this duelling pair.
                      If I can pass that red-shirt guy
                      I might get there
                      before the six-fifteen is full
                      of bleating cattle
                      breathing in the space.

                      Copyright Karin Cox 2005